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Ms. Jeffries’ latest in her Hellions of Halstead Hall series begins inauspiciously with an odd letter to readers from a character in the novel — the grandmother of the hellacious Sharpe siblings. In it, Hetty Plumtree frets about her grandson Gabriel’s willful ways, speculates about his feelings for Virginia Waverly (the sister of Gabriel’s dead best friend), and confesses her own fascination with Virginia’s grandfather, the still handsome General Waverly. This awkward précis is clunky and unnecessary, and I was baffled as to its purpose.
The letter is followed by a prologue introducing readers to a young Gabriel, and explains the story that fuels this series. The Sharpe siblings’ parents died when Gabriel was seven. This is the fourth Hellions book, and in each novel Gabriel and his siblings have uncovered clues that will lead them – in the fifth and last book (coming out in January of next year) – to finally understand who killed their parents and why. As I wrote in my review of the last Hellions book, How to Woo at Reluctant Lady, the series is best read in order. I do not recommend To Wed a Wild Lord as a stand-alone read. Actually, I don’t recommend To Wed a Wild Lord. It’s not a very convincing book.
Each Sharpe sibling has acted out in response to their parents’ untimely deaths and Gabriel is no exception. He has spent his adult life challenging mortality. He’s raced his horses dangerously so many times he’s earned the social sobriquet of “the Angel of Death.” In one such race, he and his best friend Roger Waverly raced a course where closely placed boulders allowed only one racer to pass and, as the two tried to “thread the needle,” Roger crashed and died. Roger’s remaining family — his younger sister Virginia and his bitter grandfather — blame Gabe for Roger’s death.
For his part, Gabe feels responsible for Virginia. When her brother, the heir, was killed, she lost the promise of a place to live once her grandfather dies. Furthermore, Gabe, like his siblings, must marry within the year or his grandmother will disinherit them all. So Gabe decides he will offer marriage to Virginia. By doing so he will address the guilt he feels over his part in her brother’s death, ensure Virginia a home of her own, and meet his grandmother’s demands. In the first chapter of the book, Gabe goes to a ball he’s made sure Virginia will be attending, asks her to dance, and shares his plan with her. She thinks his proposal is absurd; I suspect readers will as well.
Equally ridiculous is her challenge to him. She demands he race her on the dangerous course on which her brother died. She’s convinced she’ll beat him, embarrass him, and thus garner revenge for her brother’s death. This is such a stupid idea — she’ll risk death to shame someone who she believes doesn’t feel shame — I could barely take it seriously. Gabe, however, swayed no doubt by her beauty — she has, among other stellar attributes, eyes that “a man could wander for days in” — agrees to race her (on a lesser course) with the caveat that if he wins, he will court her.
It’s a shame Gabriel and Virginia are given such an unpromising setup in which to fall in love, because I liked the two. Gabriel is a daredevil whose insouciant arrogance covers his deep fear of losing anyone he loves. He’s a much better man than he lets anyone see and I enjoyed watching him face his demons. Virginia is a smart, capable woman who has been rather thanklessly running her grandfather’s home and horse farm. She longs to experience more of life than she’s been offered and to be seen as more than just an average miss. Both are witty, intelligent, and care deeply for their families. Ms. Jeffries writes believable, appealing characters — she’s done a good job of keeping the five Sharpes distinctive — and To Wed a Wild Lord is peopled with not only an interesting hero and heroine, but several other enjoyable secondary characters.
But good people alone do not a good story make. The plot around the lovers is so labored and maddening it compromised my capacity to care about their romantic evolution. Virginia is forced to hold on to an inaccurate view of Gabe — had she seen him for the man he really is, the book would have ended after the fourth chapter — for an absurdly long time. For far too much of the novel Gabe refuses to share the truth about Roger’s death; it seems the only reason he does so is to draw out the far-fetched tale.
Furthermore, the plot around the Sharpes’ parents’ death has become stale. I’ve lost track of the many clues, and I’ve lost interest in the resolution of this mystery. I’m even somewhat bored with the Sharpes themselves. Not enough has happened in the series to justify the thousand plus pages devoted to the Hellions of Halstead Hall. I like the characters but their larger context has lost its thrill.
At the end of To Wed a Wild Lord, Ms Jeffries writes that “as any clever woman knows, sometimes the only way to true happiness is to wed a wild lord.” Maybe. But suffering through a heavy handed, unbelievable plot to get that Happily Ever After is the way to true disenchantment.
Grade: C+
Book Type: European Historical Romance
Sensuality: Warm
Review Date: 23/11/11
Publication Date: 12/2011
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This sounds delightful! I’m grabbing it, thanks
excellent book: interesting, funny dialogs, deep understanding of each character, interesting secondary characters, and also sexy.
I don’t think anyone expects you to post UK prices – it’s just a shame that such a great sale…
I’m sorry about that. We don’t have any way to post British prices as an American based site.
I have several of her books on my TBR and after reading this am moving them up the pile.