Slightly Sinful

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Certain writers seem to have beloved premises that they revisit again and again. With Lisa Kleypas, it’s cross-class romance. Brockmann likes vulnerable tough guys who just can’t get involved with their fellow team members. And Mary Balogh never met a prostitute plot she didn’t like. Slightly Sinful, the latest entry in the Bedwyn saga, features a heroine who lives with four prostitutes and is originally assumed to be one of them. Fortunately, this particular hooker plot worked for me, though I did have some hang-ups about Balogh’s other themes – dishonesty and amnesia.

Lord Alleyne Bedwyn is a diplomat sent to deliver a letter to Wellington during the Battle of Waterloo. After delivering the letter and receiving a reply, he is shot and then injured as he falls off his horse in the forest. Looters strip his nearly lifeless body and leave him to die.

Rachel York was recently employed as a ladies’ companion in Brussels, but is now living with four friends who happen to be prostitutes. Rachel had been engaged to a minister who claimed to be collecting for charities. Instead, he traveled around stealing money. He robbed Rachel’s friends of their life savings, and she’d do nearly anything to help them get their money back. After Waterloo, they decide to go out and loot the dead. They soon discover that they are far too tender-hearted for the gruesome task. Instead of coming back with ill-gotten gains, they return with a one-eyed sergeant and the nearly dead Alleyne. They nurse them both back to health, and Rachel begins to develop a special relationship with Alleyne. She lets him believe she is a lovely, innocent-looking prostitute. He falls a little bit in love with her, but his situation is quite complicated. His fall from the horse has given him amnesia. He knows nothing about his identity. He can tell he’s clearly a gentleman, and he assumes he was a soldier.

One night when he’s nearly well, he makes love to Rachel. The experience is a disaster for both of them. He realizes immediately that she’s not a prostitute, and his subsequent performance is more than a little disappointing. Now their relationship is strained and awkward. Alleyne has one idea for making amends. He knows that Rachel wants to help her friends recover their lost money, and she has mentioned that she owns a fortune in jewels that is being held in trust by her stingy uncle until she’s 25. If she marries a man who meets her uncle’s approval, however, she can have the jewels earlier. Alleyne suggests that the lot of them have a little masquerade. They’ll visit her uncle, and he’ll pose as Rachel’s husband. Her friends will become a little more genteel and pose as respectable women. One will be Rachel’s maid, and the one-eyed sergeant (who is also still around) will be Alleyne’s valet. No one has any idea who Alleyne is, so they christen him Sir Jonathan Smith, a prosperous man with an estate in Northumberland.

It all seems like a lark, but once they arrive at the estate of Lord Weston (Rachel’s uncle) they wonder what they have gotten themselves into. He doesn’t seem to be the tyrant Rachel thought he was; rather, he is quite ill and seems very happy to see Rachel. As he welcomes them with open arms and invites the group to stay with him for a month, Rachel and Alleyne both feel guilty and wonder whether they should just tell him the truth. As the book plays out, they struggle with the deception and with their feelings for each other. Meanwhile, Alleyne still strives to remember who he is. He is quite sure that he’s falling for Rachel, but he can’t be sure that he is even single. And he has no intention of getting married until he knows what name to sign on the church register.

I have a confession to make right off: I actually peeked ahead in this book and skimmed to the end before going back and reading it in its entirety. About half-way through the book Alleyne still has no idea who he is and the lot of them are still pretending to be something they are not. I couldn’t stand the suspense anymore; I just had to find out when he figured out his identity and informed his family that he was alive. So I looked. And I am not a habitual peeker; this is only the second time I have done it in my life. My overwhelming need to peek was driven by the feeling that the amnesia and the dishonesty were both going on way too long for comfort. Once I knew just how long it all lasted I was able to enjoy the process more. Nonetheless, the extended length of the amnesia in particular tried my patience.

However, I liked nearly everything else about this book. It’s fifth in a series, but it’s no filler book. The plot and characters have a freshness often lacking in long family sagas. Balogh doesn’t rely on myriad Bedwyns to keep the plot going, mostly because Alleyne doesn’t know he is a Bedwyn. He may not know who he is, but he’s a great guy. He’s responsible without being dictatorial. He respects Rachel and gives her choices rather than issuing demands. And he’s funny and charming. Balogh also wins points for the initial awkward sex scene – I’m sure I’m not the only one who gets tired of reading about virgin heroines who have the fabulous five-star sex the first time out of the block.

Probably the biggest surprise is the success of the prostitute plot. Balogh has written about plenty of women forced into prostitution for one reason or another, generally because they were starving to death or had urgent family debts to repay. Rachel’s friends would definitely like to get out of the life, but they aren’t bitter or angry. These are light-hearted ladies of the evening who throw themselves into the masquerade with enthusiasm. They provide humor (both ribald and otherwise) and are one of the best parts of the book.

And though I found the resolution of the amnesia and the masquerade too long in coming, the eventual pay-off was terrific. The conversation between Rachel and her uncle is pitch-perfect and very much in keeping with the flavor of the book. And when Alleyne is finally reunited with his family, the scene is every bit as touching as I’d hoped. If you’ve been following along with the series and enjoying Bewcastle’s incremental thawing, you’ll likely appreciate this scene as well.

Doubtless most readers have already made their decision about whether or not to buy this book. If you have been following the Bedwyns all along, you’ll likely want to continue to follow them. While I don’t think every entry in this series has been brilliant, they’ve all been readable and in most cases, well above average. While the amnesia element was frustrating, the humor and freshness of Slightly Sinful make it well worth reading.

Reviewed by Blythe Smith

Grade: B-

Sensuality: Warm

Review Date: 16/05/04

Publication Date: 2004

Review Tags: Bedwyn saga

Recent Comments …

  1. excellent book: interesting, funny dialogs, deep understanding of each character, interesting secondary characters, and also sexy.

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