How to Be a Wallflower

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While I’ve long been a fan of Eloisa James, I have to admit that How to Be a Wallflower is not among my favorite of her works. This upbeat tale about an English heiress marrying an American businessman is sweet, but didn’t bring enough genuine conflict to the table to hold my interest.

As the story opens, Miss Cleopatra Lewis is planning her entrée into London society. Her mother was the daughter of a viscount who ran off with a servant – a good pick, since said servant went on to found Lewis Commodes, making Cleo an heiress upon his death. Unfortunately, her mother had other interests, so Cleo spent most of her youth traveling in the wake of acting troupes and observing her mother’s many affaires with stars of the stage, rather than ensconced in a stable home. After her mother’s death, Cleo decides it is high time to meet her grandfather and take her place in society, as the viscount is the only family she has left. However, the legacy of her flighty mother leaves its mark on Cleo, and makes her wary of attracting any suitors for fear they will be inconstant or untrustworthy. Thus Cleo determines she will be a wallflower during the season (despite her fiery hair and temperament, not to mention the enormous wealth of Lewis Commodes).

Jacob Astor Addison is the American equivalent of nobility, hailing from ‘old money’. He is in London on business, and visiting with friends from other books, when he encounters Cleo in a costume shop he was planning to purchase. Cleo, thinking to rescue the proprietress from what she believes is an unfair deal, makes her own offer for the shop, and in short order Cleo and Jake are facing off against each other. While the first round goes to Cleo, Jake is clearly struck by her and determined to follow up.

That ‘follow up’ slowly morphs from business rivalry to courtship with each new interaction. When Jake hatches a scheme to make the shop, Quimby’s, unappealing to the public and thus ruin Cleo’s plans for its expansion, he tells Cleo his plot immediately out of a sense of “fair play”.  This allows her to plan a counterattack, and before long the two of them are in Quimby’s together ordering new wardrobes for each other in what amounts to an elaborate inside joke. At which point the only question on anyone’s mind is: when will Jake pop the question?

Literally, that’s all Cleo’s servants ask. Which makes sense given the slow build of daily bouquets, breakfasts, afternoons spent reading contracts together, and of course the onset of their affair. Cleo and Jake are clearly falling in love, and although they don’t discuss it much, Cleo’s doubts about marriage fall away at the same pace as Jake’s certainty that he will marry her and settle in England grows.

In other words, when you strip away the confusing game of who is buying the costume shop, this is a straightforward story of two people falling in love and then choosing to be with each other. They’re a little slow about communicating their readiness to marry, sure, which causes a little confusion and hurt at the end – but it’s nothing that can’t be overcome in a quick, honest conversation. Once they do that, it’s home free to happy ever after. And while I loved that – I loved that both characters are reasonable people, and of course loved the happy ending – I couldn’t help but feel like there was something missing from the story. Without a more difficult central conflict, it lackssome of the depth I’ve enjoyed in other works by Ms. James.

So while the writing is sharp, the pacing is even, and the characters work well together, I’m afraid this book falls lower on the charts for me. Without a strong central conflict to drive the plot, I had too easy a time stepping away from How to Be a Wallflower, despite its other charms.

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Reviewed by Alexandra Anderson

Grade: C+

Book Type: Historical Romance

Sensuality: Warm

Review Date: 02/04/22

Publication Date: 03/2022

Recent Comments …

  1. excellent book: interesting, funny dialogs, deep understanding of each character, interesting secondary characters, and also sexy.

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Lil
Lil
04/04/2022 9:11 pm

I know what you mean about disappointment. Recently, as in ever since the Duchesses series, I’ve found her books very hit or miss. Recently I reread “Seven Minutes in Heaven” because I knew I had read it but I couldn’t remember it. That’s because there was nothing to remember.

Dabney Grinnan
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Reply to  Lil
04/04/2022 9:24 pm

“winces”

Anonymous
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04/03/2022 11:42 am

Does the “wallflower” element bring anything to the story, or is it just there to be a popular buzzword because the story isn’t about a duke?

Kay
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Reply to  Anonymous
04/04/2022 2:14 pm

I think it brings humor to the story when she is choosing her wardrobe (to dress like a wallflower) and is the reason why she decides to go to a costume shop instead of a regular modiste.

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Lisa Fernandes
Lisa Fernandes
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04/02/2022 1:21 pm

I love that the heroine is a commode heiress.

Elaine s
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Reply to  Lisa Fernandes
04/07/2022 11:35 am

Me too! Though sounds like this book might be eminently flushable……

Kay
Kay
04/02/2022 10:37 am

Thank you for your review. My favorite part of the book was the humor and banter when Cleo and Jake are getting to know each other. I think Eloisa James does that so well. The second half of the story felt a little repetitive. Jake is friends with Merry from My American Duchess (loved that book) and there is mention of pineapples again in How to Be a Wallflower.

Last edited 2 years ago by Kay
Julia
Julia
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04/02/2022 10:21 am

Alexandra, I COMPLETELY agree. This is a classic case of two strong central characters in search of a compelling plot.

trish
trish
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04/02/2022 8:12 am

Thanks, Alexandra, for the review. I’m not an angst bunny so I might enjoy this one more than you did. Sounds light.