Before the Dawn

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My local bookstore owner recommended that I try Beverly Jenkins, so when I got the chance to review her latest book, Before the Dawn, I took it. And while I did the find the historical and ethnic angles in this book to be interesting, I also thought it had some problems that kept it from being a satisfactory story.

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Leah Barnett, a Massachusetts tavern owner, gets an unexpected inheritance – with strings. Louis Montague, her mother’s lover, the man Leah has thought of as her stepfather all her life, is dying. He wants to give her all of his money, but he doesn’t feel he has enough time left to formally adopt her. So he proposes they wed. As his widow, Leah would naturally inherit his money. But in return, Louis wants Leah to go West, to Colorado, to find the sons he left behind thirty years ago and convey to them his regret over his abandonment of them. Leah promises, they wed, and Louis dies. But what Leah finds when she gets to Colorado is quite different from what she was expecting.

Ryder Damien, Louis’s natural son, is very bitter over his father’s desertion. A mix of three races – white, black, and Cheyenne – he was not accepted fully in any of them and had to make his own way in the world. Now a wealthy man, he meets Leah and is initially attracted to her, until he finds out who she is. Convinced that she is a fortune-hunting trophy bride, he snubs her. But when Leah runs into dire financial problems at the hands of Louis’s former enemies, Ryder proposes that she become his mistress. Leah is faced with a difficult choice: prison or sexual servitude. Which will it be?

My first problem with this book is that the set-up feels very artificial. Louis didn’t become deathly ill overnight, so he would have had the time to adopt Leah had he wanted to. It seemed to me as if Jenkins wrote the situation thus in order to create difficulties between Ryder and Leah. And the problems that Leah faces in Colorado didn’t seem authentic either. They seemed conjured up to throw Ryder and Leah together. The plot just didn’t flow – it felt overly choreographed.

I also felt uncomfortable with a few of the sexual issues the book raised. First of all, the sexual propositioning angle felt clichéd. Maybe I’ve just read too many books lately with this plot, but it seems to be getting worn out from overuse. And the fact that Ryder is propositioning his stepmother is rather off-putting. Finally, both of these characters are illegitimate, and both have suffered for it. It seems an oversight that in making their decisions they would not consider the possible suffering of any children they might create.

Finally, though Jenkins is known for a high level of historical accuracy, the book didn’t totally reflect that. There are a number of Black and Cheyenne history lessons inserted into the narrative which are authentic and interesting, but the characters don’t seem to be of the period. Ryder and Leah make out in public, and no one is scandalized. Ryder has a huge house in the mountains made of stone and glass and wood. It has an opulent bathroom with both a shower and an enormous bathtub. It’s decorated in a mix of black velvet and Indian artifacts. The way it was described made it seem like any number of suburban houses I’ve seen in the Parade of Homes. Nothing in this book made me think Victorian Era except the clothes.

One thing I did like about this book was how it dealt with the mixed-race issue. All of the characters were black, but in different ways. Louis is a mixed-race man who appears completely white, and at times passed for white. Leah’s mother was from England. Ryder is part Cheyenne and identifies very strongly with that culture. I found the mixed heritage angle to be fascinating.

Before the Dawn is written in a very readable style, and it covers some interesting history. It never dragged. But its plot and setting problems kept me from fully enjoying it. I can’t quite fully recommend this book for those reasons, but I would read Beverly Jenkins again, just for the interesting historical and ethnic perspectives she presents.

Reviewed by Rachel Potter

Grade: C

Sensuality: Hot

Review Date: 12/10/01

Publication Date: 2001

Review Tags: AoC PoC

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  1. excellent book: interesting, funny dialogs, deep understanding of each character, interesting secondary characters, and also sexy.

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