When Reading Gets Greedy: Reviewing the Chapters Romance app
After I saw that a Nalini Singh story, Cherish Hard, had been optioned by the Chapters Interactive Stories app, I decided to download it and give it a try. While I really want a game that does what Chapters is trying to do, my experience with this app is, on the whole, deeply frustrating.
What does it mean to be “interactive?” Well, not as much as it could. While you click through Chapters stories to advance the narrative, and you can decide certain things for your character to do, wear, or say, these stories are not choose-your-own-adventure. When you make a choice, generally you affect the next minute or so of the story. You might share a secret about your past, ask the hero more about himself, or, most typically, have sex. But you won’t change the overall story.
For instance, I opted not to sleep with one book’s hero, but the book was a secret baby story. So after that scene, an intertitle popped up that said “You spend the next week together, seeing Paris and making love.” My choice didn’t change the narrative arc; it just meant I didn’t get an on-screen sex scene. (When this happens, it’s frustrating – but in other situations, it can be really satisfying that the heroes have to be gracious and accepting when you decline consent, since the next scene has to work for both options).
I have found a couple of stories where, at the very end, you can make a pivot to an unhappy ending. I don’t want to put those in detail here because it’s spoilery but still… that’s not a true choose-your-own story.
I do enjoy styling, so it’s fun to set up my heroine’s appearance (there is currently one m/m story alongside some f/fs, and some stories let you adjust the hero, but this is mostly a heroine thing). Your choices are narrow, though. The four face/body looks for both men and women have a range of skin tones, but unfortunately the feature variation is limited. There is no body diversity, and while you can choose from a set of hair styles, they’re generally based on Caucasian hair.
Body and hair choices are free, but you’ll be asked to choose a wardrobe look next, and this is where the spending kicks in. There are usually three wardrobe options: seventeen diamonds, twelve diamonds, and free. (When I started on Chapters a week ago, everything came in those increments; now I keep seeing the even-more exorbitant thirty and twenty, and I don’t know why).
The poses and many of the outfits also have serious male-gaze going on. These, for instance, were one heroine’s choices for workout gear.
The finances are deliberately confusing. In addition to diamonds, you earn maple coins, usually in increments of five or ten, and when you collect forty of them, you can convert that for one diamond. And you have to spend a ticket to read the chapter.
Tickets are bought, unless you get below two, in which case they regenerate two per hour. And there’s a VIP option which – for a fee – changes all your conversion rates and purchase prices.
Is your head spinning? It’s intentional. Making in-game currencies bewildering is a strategy used by apps to create more mental distance between you and the real-life money you’re spending, making it harder for you to realize that you’re paying $2.40 for an imaginary character to wear a different set of pixels for fifteen minutes.
What does this actually mean in terms of money? I did some calculations using the prices in my non-VIP app and this is what I came up with.
The base cost to read a hypothetical 25-chapter story would be twenty-four tickets (one per chapter, and the first chapter is usually free). Since each ticket costs about 30 cents, you’re in for $7.20 just to get through the story.
You’re offered at least two and usually more premium choices per chapter.
- Cost choosing one twelve-diamond (~96 cent) option per chapter: add $24, or $31.20.
- Choosing two seventeen-diamond ($1.36) options per chapter add $68, for $75.20 all-in.
Which is… yikes.
Many stories have more than twenty-five chapters. Poison Study by Maria Snyder has thirty seven chapters, which, with two premium choices a chapter, could cost you well over $100. Plus, most newer releases have four to six choices a chapter, not the two I used here.
It’s a freemium app, so what of this can you get for free? You can cut the ticket cost if you are willing to wait the two hours for tickets to regenerate (a trick – if you open a chapter right before bed but don’t read it, you’ll be able to read 3 in a row in the morning instead of just two). There are occasional twenty-four hour passes that waive tickets for one book. For diamonds, you can earn two per chapter by watching an ad, plus you can send them to other players and hopefully get some back. You can also watch ads independently of reading. Still, an app where I spend more time watching ads to earn content than actually consuming the content is not my idea of recreation.
The other option is to avoid spending the diamonds. This usually gets you the same story, because most of the stories only have one plot outcome. You’re only paying for how you want to get there. But that’s frustrating too, because you’re especially likely to be charged if you want to not be a jerk, or if you do want to do anything independent, professional, or feminist, like stand up for yourself or make a move on your love interest. If you don’t spend money, therefore, you can end up a badly dressed, underpaid, sexually-unsatisfied incompetent doormat asshole.
Also, there are some glitches:
AND YET.
I really, really love interactive video-game style reading. When I used a free ticket pass on Poison Study (which I loved as a book), and avoided spending on anything except things I couldn’t bear to pass up, I had a great binge experience. I enjoyed Jenny Holiday’s Saving the CEO, Tessa Bailey’s Getaway Girl, and Samanthe Beck’s Private Practice (contemp), and Tiffany Reisz’s The Red (erotic). There’s F/F and M/M options, strong-romantic-elements stories like Cixin Liu’s short stories, historicals, and Spanish stories.
So Chapters, if you’re reading this – here’s what I wish for.
Let me buy the book. None of this diamond-and-ticket nonsense. Let me buy an all-inclusive, choose-whatever-the-heck-you-want digital story for a price that isn’t an exploitative rip-off, one not massively out of whack with what it would cost me to buy the actual book, or an RPG (I can get The Sims, with no ads, for $20!). If you MUST keep the diamond system, simplify and be transparent in your finances and stop making the free options degrading. And make our choices matter – that’s the real value of your format. (If you need advice on this, call Kitty Curran and Larissa Zageris and option the hilarious and delightful My Lady’s Choosing.)
Otherwise… well, those stories I was enjoying? They’re based on novels. I gave up on the Chapters and got the ebooks instead.
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~ Caroline Russomanno
You really hit the nail on the head with the trashy choice options. It’s really frustrating how they strong arm you into paying diamonds just so your character isn’t a complete jerk for no reason or stay stuck in a horrible situation.
It’s an awful way to get people to pay up. The diamond choices are also incredibly expensive (nearly 20 diamonds for a single choice unless you want to pay like 10.00 a month to get that cut by like 25%.
And you don’t even get unlimited tickets for paying real money, and you’re still using diamonds on an app where you have to diamond mine to get a good amount.
Chapters have interesting stories but the way the app is set up is garbage. They need to stop trying to force people to pay just to make decent choices.
You really hit the nail on the head with the trashy choice options. It’s really frustrating how they strong arm you into paying diamonds just so your character isn’t a complete jerk for no reason or stay stuck in a horrible situation.
The main reason I stopped playing Chapters and found other, more interesting similar games.
Honestly yeah. This method of monetization annoys me since I’m not employed.
I wanted to play one dating game option and to fly with the king, I would have to pay 2.50 to go flying. The themes were on my isle of interests, but I wasn’t willing to foot 2.50 for an option.
One option I’ve been to cope with the microtransactions is to make a playthrough of it and similar games. Like one Comedian pair got to playing the Love Island game, then made a fusion woman of each other for their player character. Then later they learned they could pay for gems to get more options to play the game even more. Noel Miller’s playthrough is great.
And to be honest, I learned that The Sims Mobile game uses individual actions on a timer. Want to paint? Wait 8 hours or give me a token. So even that’s spotty for me, a former Sims addict.
You can watch people do playthroughs of Chapters games on Youtube and they always buy the expensive options. I don’t like it because they always go really slowly, and because if I’ve started a story with a character’s appearance and name set, it’s weird to see them differently in the playthrough. Still. it was something I did once to see an alternate ending because I’d run out of diamonds at the finish..
I’ve discovered one really good thing about the Chapters ads, though! Typically they’re about 30 seconds. So I’ve started opening Chapters and running an ad before I start washing my hands, and then I stop and dry right as the timer runs out.
Fight flu and viruses with your Chapters app!
Like nblibgirl, I am an old fuddy duddy too. I find this whole thing shocking and akin to online gambling which is a huge problem or some of the online games where children spend huge amounts unbeknown to their parents. I will stick to books and my kindle, thanks. And as an Outlander fan, I prefer DG to write the story without any in-put from me. Fascinating, Caroline, but not a chance in hell that this could be for me; actually sounds like a bit of a scam.
I had no idea this even existed. I am very intrigued even though it seems like it has the same old grabby, greedy money needing requirements as so many games seem to. (Don’t even get me started on the Disney Magic Kingdoms game).
Also this is my favorite quote of the month, possibly the year so far:
” you don’t spend money, therefore, you can end up a badly dressed, underpaid, sexually-unsatisfied incompetent doormat asshole.”
People walking by are likely wondering why I am surprising giggles in my office. Thank you for the much needed chuckle as well as the review! If I do end up getting the app I will be using this article as a resource!
Haha, thanks!
Wow . . . I had no idea about any of this (and being an old fuddy, duddy who not only does not game, but doesn’t even like to see favorite books turned into movies or tv series) there is so much about this that sounds completely icky to me, I don’t even no where to begin. BUT if it encourages authors/publishers to go back to writing longer, more complicated stories, then YAY! Imagine the financial boon to Diana Gabaldon for her Outlander books.
Ugh. Sorry. Should have been “I don’t even KNOW where to begin”
Interesting, I did not know this existed! Sounds like it could be fun, done differently.
Also: I’m looking at the workout pic with the red boy shorts. Maybe it’s just me, but is she….is she…seriously, is it just me?
No, it’s not just you. She has quite an impressive… uh… package. It reminds me of the time on MST3K where the bots were riffing “Space Mutiny” and the woman in the spacesuit had a similar look, so one of them said in an Australian accent, “She got an armadillo down her trousers!”
I’m a longtime reader of the fashion critique web site “Go Fug Yourself” where they refer to this ghost bulge as “polterwang.”
I completely agree with you. I love the idea of interactive stories on my phone like this and tried one of those apps once but quickly gave up. Unfortunately until we get each book for a reasonable, fixed price, I am never going to download another of those apps again because I just feel disrespected by their horrible business practices.
This sounds like a fantastic concept but poorly executed. I agree that there should be a flat rate, perhaps the same price as the e-book, that comes with all features- none of this expensive nickel and diming business. If Chapters modeled their program after The Sims, they could have a winner. Get people hooked on buying each book, and they could make a fortune. Maybe there could even be a mod where characters from separate books can get together and mingle with each other. But all these hidden fees are a total turn off.
My recommendation to the creators would be to have three play options available in each game under one flat rate: 1) Follow the story while making minor choices like hair, clothes, etc. (for players who don’t want to make too many decisions and customizations). 2) Choose your own adventure model where decisions affect the direction of the story, and 3) Free play mode (a lot like the Sims but no risk of the characters aging or dying). Players should also be allowed to play the game as many times as they choose, perhaps with three different save files available in case they want to play all three versions.
Lol on the “workout” outfits. They look more like beachwear.