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Alex Whitehall’s Second Skin is a stand-alone title, set mainly on an American college campus. I really appreciate and admire what the author is trying to do with this story.Second Skin is a NA (New Adult) romance title, this I believe places protagonists in their early twenties. NA is a sub-genre that is hard to get exactly right, and like the YA romance category is more open to criticism for including either too much sex, or too little. Sadly, I don’t feel this author gets it quite right this time for several reasons.
Jay is a trans man attending university. He is having a few problems with Maths and assigned a student mentor. His mentor is Roswell, a handsome man to whom Jay is attracted from the off and happily, it seems the attraction is reciprocated. The trans conversation is a non-issue, in that Jay has been listed as ‘Jenna’, his assigned birth name, on Roswell’s list, and so Jay can explain and Roswell accepts this with little question. Due to the sci-fi sub-genre I let go unchallenged this early in the novella, the ease with which difficult concepts – like rejecting gendered birth names and living in a campus that denies his gender – are approached. However, I had a number of issues with the novella that no later plot twist could resolve.
One was the dialogue. These are twenty somethings, and although it could be argued that there is a reason for ‘Roswell’ having slightly stilted dialogue, it applies to all the characters. They either spoke like grandparents or blushed like young teens.
”Oh.” Roswell blinked and glanced around. “Sorry, I think I, uh, was daydreaming there. What were we saying?”
“I was just talking about my god-awful English class,” Jay lied. Roswell slid a half smile his way – sad. But appreciative.
None of the conversations sound believable and all the characters emote either by blushing, or if straight, by ruffling Jay’s hair, roughly. I think this was called a ‘noogie’.
Some of the descriptions are very ‘off’ too. A bony dorm couch was flanked by two equally stiff lounge chairs that sat opposite a television, but if the problems were limited to the language and the dialogue, I could still have lost myself in a good plot. Unfortunately, the plot is very thin and the conflict – caused by something that would be a spoiler too far here – is more or less resolved by the most overused trope ever – ‘accident’ and ‘injury’.
I don’t mean to be harsh, because trans stories are needed. We need beautiful, hopeful romances for trans people, especially the young. Romances that show their lives can be filled, with love and acceptance like any other. This love story was sweet, but the characters were too stiff and stilted even for the plot twist. Plus, after reading it, I didn’t feel that trans people could experience passionate romance. The message felt as though it was if you are trans you can only really find love with someone who is more alienated, and different, than you feel yourself to be.
I would have liked to have read more about why ‘Jay’ was in a female dorm, and how he dealt with that. Why having called himself ‘Jay’ – which isn’t, as stated in the novella, too much like Jenna – the last pages of the story are just about trying out new names for him? Again, I have to repeat, these are healthy college students in their early twenties – the conflicts are resolved, and they are in love with each other. The lack of any sex is not only as disappointing as Roswell’s back story – but it gives the message that a normal sexual relationship is too complex to write about when it includes a trans man.
There were some small details that I really liked – acknowledgments of ‘Jay’s dysphoria and his jealousy regarding Roswell – but so much more could have been made of this story. Granted, Second Skin is a novella, but it left me feeling unsatisfied and a little let-down.
Grade: C
Book Type: New Adult|Science Fiction
Sensuality: Kisses
Review Date: 12/04/16
Publication Date: 2016/04
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Yep
This sounds delightful! I’m grabbing it, thanks
excellent book: interesting, funny dialogs, deep understanding of each character, interesting secondary characters, and also sexy.
I don’t think anyone expects you to post UK prices – it’s just a shame that such a great sale…
I’m sorry about that. We don’t have any way to post British prices as an American based site.
I have several of her books on my TBR and after reading this am moving them up the pile.